The Coldest Girl in Coldtown

The Coldest Girl in Coldtown
by Holly Black
Published September 3rd 2013 by Little, Brown Books for Young Readers
419 pages

Summary: (from Goodreads.com)

Tana lives in a world where walled cities called Coldtowns exist. In them, quarantined monsters and humans mingle in a decadently bloody mix of predator and prey. The only problem is, once you pass through Coldtown’s gates, you can never leave.

One morning, after a perfectly ordinary party, Tana wakes up surrounded by corpses. The only other survivors of this massacre are her exasperatingly endearing ex-boyfriend, infected and on the edge, and a mysterious boy burdened with a terrible secret. Shaken and determined, Tana enters a race against the clock to save the three of them the only way she knows how: by going straight to the wicked, opulent heart of Coldtown itself.

Review:
I thought it was interesting that the book started out with a "wow factor"; a girl is one of three people left alive at the party. The weird thing about this to me is, this book is about vampires. They can smell blood. They can hear heartbeats. Why would they just happen to skip a girl who fell asleep in a bathtub? Despite that one thing that irked me through the entire book, I thought it was pretty interesting as far as vampire fiction for teens goes. The main thing I liked about it was Tana was a strong lead female. I also liked that romance was NOT the main theme of the story, only a fragment of a side theme (and even then it wasn't really interesting). 

I pretty much felt blah about this whole book. The plot of the story was rather boring. It got good for maybe the last 5 chapters(?) and then it was just sort of up and down from that. I'd actually be more interested in a sequel if there was one since Ms. Black already has the characters and the setting already fleshed out so she could spend more time on a better story line and I would like to see how the character relationships turn out.

SCORE: 3/5

Maid for Me

Maid for Me
by Kat Lieu
Published November 18, 2009 by NummyzProd

Summary (from goodreads.com):

Feisty Mina Lin waltzes on glass shards when she lands a job as billionaire Jaiden Daniels's maid. What happens when Jaiden hires her to become his pretend girlfriend? Pretending to be in love with the hot Rich Boy is hard, when Mina's heart only beats for her boy next door, Kiterin Forrests. What happens when Mina doesn't know what her heart wants and a crazy Stalker is after Jaiden's life, and the only person who can save him is Mina?

Find out in Maid for Me, starring Mina Lin, an ambitious, silly, funny, and talented Asian-American heroine who has even developed her own fighting styled called Mina-Jitsu. A fast-paced debut novel for young adults, by Kat Lieu. Filled with hilarious dialogue, suspense, sparkling wit and imagination-- a romance novel packed with action and humor!

Review:
I read this as a free e-book download through my Amazon Prime membership. While I applaud the author for self-publishing and writing a novel, this book was a little bit of a disappointment. While Maid for Me isn't the worst book that I have ever read, it definitely needed a lot of work. The point of view between characters sometimes changed within the next paragraph or even to a different set of characters who were not even in the current setting. Near the climax of the story, the point of view changed so frequently that it ruined the whole pacing and took me away from the suspense. While I thought it was a cute, spunky read that would definitely appeal to fans of Japanese dramas and Korean dramas, or even anime and manga; it has little going for it outside of that. There could have been a little more character development with all the characters of the book, as I often felt I was just reading the story instead of 'being there'.

2/5

Maggot Moon

Maggot Moon
by Sally Gardner
Published February 12, 2013 by Candlewick

Summary:
(from goodreads.com)

What if the football hadn’t gone over the wall? On the other side of the wall there is a dark secret. And the devil. And the Moon Man. And the Motherland doesn’t want anyone to know. But Standish Treadwell — who has different-colored eyes, who can’t read, can’t write, Standish Treadwell isn’t bright — sees things differently than the rest of the "train-track thinkers." So when Standish and his only friend and neighbor, Hector, make their way to the other side of the wall, they see what the Motherland has been hiding. And it’s big...One hundred very short chapters, told in an utterly original first-person voice, propel readers through a narrative that is by turns gripping and darkly humorous, bleak and chilling, tender and transporting.

Review:

Maggot Moon is really written beautifully; sentences flow off of each other with ease and add to the continuous flow of the story. However, I felt like this book was very confusing! The summary states that it is set in a Regime, and using context clues, one concludes that it is a Russian one due to the use of the word "Motherland" in reference to the country. I've read in other reviews that it is a "what-if" novel, concluding what the world would be like if Germany had won WWII. Either way, the book is eerie: a post-apocolyptic-esque setting with a Big Brother type governement ruling with an iron fist. While I enjoy books that thrust you right into the story with little explanation, this book didn't make much sense to me until about the last 30 chapters. The ending was not what I was expecting, but to be honest, none of the book is really what I expected it to be. I think one of the best things this book has is small chapters. It would be great for a reluctant reader to feel accomplished and keep reading on.

2.5/5

Ketchup Clouds

Ketchup Clouds
by Annabel Pitcher
Published November 12, 2013 by Little Brown Books for Young Readers

Summary:
(from goodreads.com)

Dear Mr. S. Harris, 
Ignore the blob of red in the top left corner. It's jam, not blood, though I don't think I need to tell you the difference. It wasn't your wife's jam the police found on your shoe. . . . 
I know what it's like. 
Mine wasn't a woman. Mine was a boy. And I killed him exactly three months ago. 
Zoe has an unconventional pen pal--Mr. Stuart Harris, a Texas Death Row inmate and convicted murderer. But then again, Zoe has an unconventional story to tell. A story about how she fell for two boys, betrayed one of them, and killed the other. 
Hidden away in her backyard shed in the middle of the night with a jam sandwich in one hand and a pen in the other, Zoe gives a voice to her heart and her fears after months of silence. Mr. Harris may never respond to Zoe's letters, but at least somebody will know her story--somebody who knows what it's like to kill a person you love. Only through her unusual confession can Zoe hope to atone for her mistakes that have torn lives apart, and work to put her own life back together again.

Review
Ketchup Clouds is a book about "Zoe", a resident of the UK who reaches out to a inmate on death row in Texas, USA because they have something in common: they both killed someone.

The story is told through letters that Zoe has written to inmate Stuart Harris, regarding the events leading up to how she supposedly killed someone. While the book deals with the immense guilt and remorse that Zoe feels about this incident, it isn't the only focus of the book. Zoe's family problems are also brought to light as well as the story of two boys.

I enjoyed reading Ketchup Clouds because of the well written prose of Zoe's letters and the even pacing. It was fast when Zoe's emotions were intense, and slow when she was down. You get caught up in the book so quickly because you're only getting snippets of what happens, and as the story progresses you start reading a bit obsessively to figure out who it is that she killed.


I feel like the book ended well, but when I read the last page, I hate to admit that I didn't feel strongly that I liked or disliked this book. I thought it was well written and that I quickly related to the characters.  I found myself less interested in the story that Zoe had to tell and more interested in the problems of her family, as the characteristics of her other family members seemed to outshine her own. 

While I think this was a good read, I feel like it was also missing something and what it is I can't put my finger on.

3/5

Masque of the Red Death

Masque of the Red Death
by Bethany Griffin
Published April 2012 by Greenwillow Books

Summary (goodreads):

Everything is in ruins.A devastating plague has decimated the population. And those who are left live in fear of catching it as the city crumbles to pieces around them. So what does Araby Worth have to live for?
Nights in the Debauchery Club, beautiful dresses, glittery make-up . . . and tantalizing ways to forget it all.
But in the depths of the club—in the depths of her own despair—Araby will find more than oblivion. She will find Will, the terribly handsome proprietor of the club. And Elliott, the wickedly smart aristocrat. Neither boy is what he seems. Both have secrets. Everyone does. And Araby may find something not just to live for, but to fight for—no matter what it costs her.

Review:
I picked this one up when one of my favorite authors left a tempting review for it on Goodreads before it was released. It follows Araby Worth into a world corrupted by plague and the rich King Prospero. Everyone wears masks to avoid catching the plague, but they are normally only afforded by the rich. For me, the story was hard to follow in the beginning, just because there would be a scene transition but the flow of the writing didn't allow for me to pick up on such things. Again, it was probably because of the type of reader I am (FAST!). I liked the secondary characters and the ending was very unpredictable, at least to me, something that doesn't happen often in YA books anymore. I finished it in a few days of reading on and off because the story and the writing pulled me into the world, and I didn't want to leave until the book was finished. The ending left me a bit unsatisfied, but I was happier when I checked again on Goodreads and found that it is actually going to be a series.

3.5/5

Friends with Boys

Friends with Boys

Faith Erin Hicks

Published Feb. 2012 by First Second

224 illustrated pages

Summary:

A coming-of-age tale with a spooky twist!

Maggie McKay hardly knows what to do with herself. After an idyllic childhood of homeschooling with her mother and rough-housing with her older brothers, it’s time for Maggie to face the outside world, all on her own. But that means facing high school first. And it also means solving the mystery of the melancholy ghost who has silently followed Maggie throughout her entire life. Maybe it even means making a new friend—one who isn’t one of her brothers.

Review:

This graphic novel follows Maggie, a homeschooled teenager, and her immersion into public high school. She has a challenge: making a friend that isn’t one of her 3 older brothers. Kookier still, is a ghost that follows Maggie around through various points of the story. Not only does she have to deal with High School but a ghost as well.

Hicks does a great job putting you in the shoes of Maggie. Each page is richly illustrated with backgrounds and there is a lot of feeling behind character’s facial expressions. It’s surprising how she uses body language and expressions to say things that are unsaid, like the animosity between her eldest brother and one of her new friends.

The novel sometimes feels like a slice of life comic, with no particular plot line. It seems to gain more of a storyline near the end of the book, and I’m hoping for something a bit more structured in book 2.

I’m also still a little unclear on why the author chose the title she did for the series, but I assume that in the original drafts the storyline pertained a bit more to the title.

Fans of the Scott Pilgrim series will most likely enjoy Friends with Boys.

3.5/5

The Deathday Letter

Deathday Letter

by Shaun Hutchinson

Published by Simon Pulse June 2010

256 pages

Summary (from Amazon): Oliver lives in a world where at some point in their lives, everyone receives a Deathday Letter, a letter that kindly lets you know you have twenty-four hours left to live. Abraham Lincoln received one, Heath Ledger received one, and on an otherwise typical Thursday morning, fifteen-year-old Oliver Travers receives one. Bummer.

With his best friend by his side, Ollie has one day left to live life to the fullest, go on every adventure possible…and set things right with the girl of his dreams.

Review:

Set in a world like our own where people receive letters letting them know when they are going to die, you think that this story would be a bit darker. The main character Oliver, is a riot. There were so many times I had to stop reading the book because I was laughing too hard. His wit and sense of humor keep the story fresh while he lives out his last day alive with his two friends.

While it is a story about a boy living his last day, there is also great character development. The Ollie we see at the beginning of the story is very different from the one at the end. He learns that even though he’s going to die, there are others that are going to have to deal with the grief left behind. He goes from being a very selfish boy to finally realizing that the world doesn’t revolve around him.

The only thing I found annoying was the constant “me-me-me” attitude of Ollie. At first it’s funny, but after a while it begins to grate on your nerves. Still, I loved this book and it was a fun read.

3.5/5